I liked the way you have lots of facts about Jesus and I mean like a lot of facts so well done.
You taught me lots of cool facts and other things about Jesus that I actually didn't know before, I didn't know that much about Jesus before.
Next time, you could add either some pictures, or a goodbye slide, those two things are really good. I do like how you have the transition for the title and slides but I think I found an issue with your grammar in one of them.
Mind if I ask some questions, good. Ok, did your whole class do this blog post or just some of them? Did you enjoy doing this post? Do you believe in Jesus?
Alright I think It's time to end it here, well goodbye Jorja, hope you had a great time blogging, cya!
Hey Amelia, Thank you for your comment! The whole class did a slideshow about Jesus journey. No I didn't enjoy this post because it took all of our time, and we missed out on our normal subjects! Yes I do believe in Jesus, because I go to a Catholic school!
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Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have lots of facts about Jesus and I mean like a lot of facts so well done.
You taught me lots of cool facts and other things about Jesus that I actually didn't know before, I didn't know that much about Jesus before.
Next time, you could add either some pictures, or a goodbye slide, those two things are really good. I do like how you have the transition for the title and slides but I think I found an issue with your grammar in one of them.
Mind if I ask some questions, good. Ok, did your whole class do this blog post or just some of them? Did you enjoy doing this post? Do you believe in Jesus?
Alright I think It's time to end it here, well goodbye Jorja, hope you had a great time blogging, cya!
Hey Amelia, Thank you for your comment! The whole class did a slideshow about Jesus journey. No I didn't enjoy this post because it took all of our time, and we missed out on our normal subjects! Yes I do believe in Jesus, because I go to a Catholic school!
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