W.A.L.T a piece of persuasive of writing.
To Whom It May Concern,
It has come to my attention that teachers aren’t getting paid enough and they are getting angry to the principal because their not getting paid.
The principal is being difficult to all of the teachers and the principal might fire all of the teachers for being angry cause they didn’t get money.
If the teachers had the same amount they would being paying the rent food money, the teachers children clothes and the important thing food.
It is important because the teachers might fire the principal BECAUSE he is not doing anything to get more money the principal is going to speak to the GOVERNMENT about it.
Yours Sincerely,
Jorja
Hi Jorja!, I love this piece of writing and I you have completely persuaded me that teachers should get paid more. I like how you have separated your ideas into paragraphs. How did you come up with the category ?
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Thank you for the comment
ReplyDeleteHi there Jorja, My name is Abby and I am a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you thought about blogging this.
Did you think about that maybe the principal is also not being paid enough.
Next time you could explain more about the strike.
Why did you do this post?
Kind Regards,
Abby.
Hey Abby, thank you for your comment I did this post because my class had to a piece of writing to persuade the principal to put the teachers on strike the principal has the money that is why the teachers get paid!
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