What I found hard: To make my Llama and my story
What I enjoyed the most: I enjoyed making the story
What I can work on: I can work on making my Llama look EVIL
In Room 5 we had to write a story. So we did a piece of art and had to write about that. Most of us found it hard, I couldn't be bothered checking all the punctuation and detail! Here is my story:
CHAPTER 1:
July 1st, 2019.
A 34 year old teacher, she was GROUCHY and OLD, she met my 12 year old llama called EVIL and she was a STALKER.
My llama’s father was a ghost, the poor llama had to listen carefully to what her says, and if EVIL didn’t listen to him, his father would yell, “SHUT THE FRONT DOOR” as loud as he could to get her attention.
One afternoon when I was opening the ROTTEN door the OLD GROUCHY teacher scared me when I was walking past the CREEPY CORRIDOR.
“AHHH!!” I screamed.
The OLD GROUCHY teacher laughed “HAHAHA”.
So It was finally PAYBACK TIME.
When Evil was going out to grab a snack to eat one morning, and when I grabbed my snack, outside where everyone was there I said,’ “BOO” and then she screamed, ‘AHHH’.
“HAHAHA I said, that was from before.
I will keep on scaring her until she gives up, she was getting quite sick of the llama scaring the teacher because she’s OLD & GROUCHY.
She really needs to watch WHO’S behind her back 24/7!
CHAPTER 2:
In Term 2 Week 5.
My llama tried to do something stupid to the OLD GROUCHY.
That teacher that always has to have lollies & chocolate every single day, so one day EVIL tried to hide the OLD GROUCHY teacher’s lollies.
My llama didn’t know where to hide her stuff so the SNEAKY principle came in when the OLD GROUCHY teacher was nowhere to be.
The principle helped my llama to put the OLD GROUCHY teacher's lollies inside a desk, that no one knew where it was.
EVIL didn’t know about it until everyone was spreading rumours around.
The OLD GROUCHY teacher was DISAPPOINTED & DISGUSTED about the SNEAKY Principle.
The OLD GROUCHY teacher didn’t have a great day after all that!
Wow jorja hi my name is Ashlee I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model school I like the way that you added so much of color and it really stands out. when you made this it reminded me of when I was three and I drew a picture for my hole family and they were really nice about it. how come you chosen to put a unicorn horn on it because it looks really good and how long did it take you to make it.
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