WALT writing a fiction story!
Jellyfish Adventures
Once I was in the deep ocean that anyone can’t touch the sand I was swimming I saw a Shark going after me and same with the Jellyfish. When I got out I was bitten everywhere when I looked to the sky and the clouds were moving and I was wondering why and how after all that I went home my Mum was looking for me and I said. At the ocean with the sharks Mum and Dad said Oh’ no are you ok and my siblings came and cried where have you been I said...
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