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My Family
My family's name is the Moulin's and the Tipoki's, there are 6 people in my Mum's house, and in my Dad's house there is my Dad sometimes me and Kelly.
My Sisters name's are Rouru, Teina, Brielle and my Brother's name is Nga and his girlfriend Tulua, their son NJ and my 3 siblings are cook island but Brielle and I are from New Zealand, Tulua is Samoan and NJ is half cook island and half Samoan.
My Mum works at the Chris Ruth Centre where she Supports people and as a Social Worker. My Dad works at Fresh Choice as a Baker.
With my Dad we sometimes go to Hanmer springs, Kelly her son Leo and me.
My Mum was born in 1979 and my Dad was born in 1978.
I Live at my Mum's house in Woolston and my Dad's house in Hornby, by the local mall and my school.
This is why I like my Family, I get to do some cool things and get to go shopping!
My Sisters name's are Rouru, Teina, Brielle and my Brother's name is Nga and his girlfriend Tulua, their son NJ and my 3 siblings are cook island but Brielle and I are from New Zealand, Tulua is Samoan and NJ is half cook island and half Samoan.
My Mum works at the Chris Ruth Centre where she Supports people and as a Social Worker. My Dad works at Fresh Choice as a Baker.
With my Dad we sometimes go to Hanmer springs, Kelly her son Leo and me.
My Mum was born in 1979 and my Dad was born in 1978.
I Live at my Mum's house in Woolston and my Dad's house in Hornby, by the local mall and my school.
This is why I like my Family, I get to do some cool things and get to go shopping!
Hi Jorja, it is Sara at St Bernadette's school.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way that you have some paragraph it was a lot. It reminds me that I've written this but I have not. Maybe next time put the short sentence to another one together so that it look stand out.
Hey Sara, Thank you Sara for your comment I will make it stand out and put more short sentences!
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