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Tuesday, 18 September 2018

The Forest

The Forest

  I was walking down the forest and I saw a girl who looked like a ghost, and she yelled HELP, HELP , HELP I came over and she said I’m going to kill you to death I ran fast until I got home when I got home there were 6 polices 3 with the dogs and 3 normal ones. My parents said where have you been ! “I said in the forest why”… Everyone said do not go there why I asked everyone said because it is dangerous it was like everyone was protecting me. “I said to everyone I didn't want to be protected and” 'I thought something happened “I said to mum and said what is happening” I felt like ghost were inside me the whole time I was swinging around everything like my mum said I was haunted I went to bed and I tried to go to sleep.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 September 2018 at 12:38

    Hi Jorja,

    What a good story. It had a little serious look. It was really amazing. Maybe you could finish your story.

    Zipporah

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  2. Anonymous27 September 2018 at 10:52

    Hey Zipporah, thank you for your comment I will finish my story!

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