Kia ora,
In class for this term we have been doing reading groups and each group has a passage their reading about , my group is Sophie and we're reading: Penguin
Hospital.
For this activity we have to make 'Design a way protecting young penguins from dogs on the beach OR a way protecting young penguins from drifting fishing
nets'. For this I made a google drawing!
Hi Jorja! I like how you made a poster about protecting the penguins and how you added some information about it. Maybe next time you could maybe add more detail into what your writing and to add more color?
ReplyDeleteHey Fria,
DeleteThanks for your comment!
Yes I will next time when I edit it!
- Jorja :)
Hi Jorja, I really like how you have put a really nice poster and that you have write about penguins getting hurt by dogs and injured. I also like you have made your poster really catchy and cool. Maybe next time you could actually make the background colorful. Overall Tumeke koe!
ReplyDeleteHey Denise,
DeleteThanks for your comment! Yes I will when I have the time for editing it!
Thank you :), Jorja!
Hi Jorja it's Laura from Yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteWow what an amazing blog post.
did you know I love penguin they are so cute.
what is the story about?
Kind regards Laura from YMS.
Kia Ora I'm Jorja Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you add cute little penguins to the sides.
Did you think about making it with your friend.
Next time you could add some more penguins.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)