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Friday, 8 November 2019

Boots: Descriptive Writing



 Kia ora,

 In Class for writing we have been looking at Descriptive Writing: (That's our topic for the this term).We got paired up with someone, my buddy is: Fria, after that we had to describe about a Character that's from a cartoon or a show. Our character that we described about is Boots from: Dora the explorer!

This is our writing that we described about:

Boots is a monkey that loves and cares about his family and friends. Boots is very smart as a human, because he can speak Spanish.

Boots can be more cheekier than swiper. When Dora and Boots friends, needs his help he is always there. When Boots was lost or needs a friend Dora is always there, like Boots is.

The trees move around as Boots and Dora saves the day. Boots and Dora explore the wild, and help other animals in the forest when they are stuck or lost, then they get them back home safely. Boots, is an amazing Monkey, when Dora or someone tells him what to do.

Boots can get very clingy when he’s around Dora, he is very climby when he is around trees and, Boots is very adventurous. Boots is a very talkative monkey, but that is a good thing so he can cooperate with Dora when someone is in need of help. Boots is very brave whenever he’s with bad people. BOOM

Overall this is Boots personality and life. Maybe you should watch Dora the Explorer, to learn what Boots does? Boots loves his bananas as a treat, the end!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jorja
    I have watched this program and you both have done well to describe the character Boots.
    Maybe add a picture of him so people who haven't seen this program can see who you are talking about.
    Keep up the good work. Look forward in seeing more on your blog!!

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  2. Hello jorja,
    I am Alan from yaldhurst model school.

    Great blog post. How did you write so much?

    I have commented your buddy, Fria also.

    You can improve your blog post by putting some more picturee.
    Kind regards
    Alan

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