What Causes Rain?
In class for our reading groups we have been doing a Infographic that tells you: Diagrams, Pictures, Flow-charts, Graphs
We have to describe about the stuff that happens. I have made a google drawing for this Infographic.
Each second week we make a Infographic and the next week we make a Story Web!
Do you love Rain?
Do you love Rain?
Hi Jorja, It's Mark from your school. I like the way you added information about how it rains and what causes it, it's really specific.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of when we had to learn about rain on my old school, but I didn't get it everytime I learn it.
Why does the water vapour float up in the air?
Let me know for the answers.
Mark
Hey Mark, thanks for the comment
DeleteThis is when water changes from liquid into an invisible gas and is taken up into the air.
(: Jorja :)
Hi laura Im Hasa from YMS. I liked the fact that you made a blog post of why it rains. Even though you had not much writing your slide is still really epic.
ReplyDeleteWhen you made this blog post were you happy that it turned out really good.
why did you do something this would you kindly ask your reacher and replied to me of what your teacher said.
what inspired you to do this.
Hey Hasan, thank you for your comment
DeleteYes I was happy about the blog post!
Ummm, when I have free time I will
It's just part of the reading activities we have to do
(: Jorja :)
Hi Joria This is Michaela from YMS
ReplyDeleteHi what reading group are you in for reading when does it rain is the clouds they turn grey they were white then grey, Does it say how long it takes to get into the clouds and when it rains
(kind regards) Michaela:)-
Hey Michaela, thank you for your comment
DeleteI'm in Charlie for reading. I'm not quite sure about that sorry:(
I don't think so
(: Jorja :)
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you describe why the stuff happens.
The facts you used are amazing.
Maybe next time you could write a little bit more.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Hey Jorja, thank you for your comment
DeleteWhen I have free time I will go back and check it
(: Jorja :)
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ReplyDeleteGood job Jorja, I can see you have been writing about the main part of the story witch is what causes rain
ReplyDeleteDoes the sun have to do anything with the droplets and the clouds
Tumeke Koe
Kia Ora, I am Mykiala from Yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI liked this blog post.
It is really good.
I enjoyed reading the infographic or whatever it is.
Next time maybe say hello or something.
Why have you shared this with us.
Keep it up.
Mykiala YMS!!!
Hi Jorja! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow! I really love the illustrations you made to explain what causes rain! They help me understand what you're trying to say!
You know how you mentioned condensation, well I'm definitely not new to that. Because In my house, a whole lot of condensation forms. Because outside, if FREEZING normally, and inside my house is nice and warm. Because I have a fireplace in my house.
Next time, maybe you could try to use a more interesting title. I mean, Wk 9 infographic doesn't sound as good as, perhaps the rain life cycle, or, I don't know, the magical cycle of rain! XD Just something that draws the reader's attention. And maybe try adding more of an introduction. Like, Hi there! Welcome back to my fantastic blog! Today, I've decided to post a blog about... It brings a more, almost positive feel.
And what's an "Infographic?"
From Hana ┬┴┬┴┤( ͡° ͜ʖ├┬┴┬┴ (Hehe, CREEPY)
Hi Jorja I'm Corbin from yaldhurst model school. I like how you added in lots of writing before you added in the google drawing. you could make the google drawing quality a bit better and make the lines fatter. kind regards Corbin.
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